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Kostia Dmytriiev's avatar

Really liked this. "I hope she is well. I hope she remembers me." is the line that got me, because that's where the fear stops being the storm and becomes something lonelier, the worry that he's already been forgotten. The SOS repeating into "Nothing" builds the dread beautifully, and the shelf of small precious things does so much with so little. You never name what's outside, and that's exactly why it works. Lovely, tense piece.

Kathy Dirickson's avatar

In its own way it's so lonely and like he has a storm raging in and around him.

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