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Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

You really captured the ritual, haunted cadence of Tolkien’s world here without making it feel like simple imitation. The repetition and sound structure carry that sense of obsession and corrosion beautifully.

“But the gold began to hunger” especially stood out to me. That’s where the Ring stops feeling like an object and becomes a living will again.

There’s something genuinely tragic in the way Sméagol’s voice keeps collapsing into devotion and ruin at the same time.

Ilias Shepherd Marrow's avatar

Stefan!!!! Brilliant writing!!!! Oh my goodness!!!!

Mack!!! Wow! Phenomenal voice over!!!! What the heck n’ stuff guys!!!!!

I listened ta Smeagol first … gonna go fer the Hero Version next!!!

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