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Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

There's something wonderfully old-world about this. The repeated refrain feels like the kind of warning that survives because no one believes it until it's too late. I especially liked how the horse transforms almost imperceptibly from comfort into terror—the shift is gradual enough that it catches you off guard. It reads like a forgotten folk ballad someone rescued from the river itself.

Angela J Fisher's avatar

Have you seen The Last Unicorn? It's an animated movie from the 80s and was my favorite movie as a kid. Your song brought that movie to mind for me. Thank you.

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